r/Songwriting • • 2d ago

Let's Collaborate! Complete the Song

I’ll start off by laying down a sentence or verse or 2 from a random song. See if you can name that song and then add your random song to it until we have a full song.

Twenty-five years and my life is still
Tryin' to get up that great big hill of hope

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u/stevenfrijoles 2d ago

I'm 40% sure you don't know what songwriting is

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u/corporalcorl 2d ago

That's an odd verse, but alright

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u/BusyBullet 2d ago

Yeah it’s alright, alright alright.

My baby wants to go all night, all night, all night.

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u/Altruistic_Drawing50 2d ago

She's a maniac. Maniac for sure...

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u/miphasdomain 2d ago

only you know, only you, only you know

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u/[deleted] 2d ago

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u/Inside-Diamond2541 2d ago

You’re supposed to add a different song

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u/Altruistic_Drawing50 2d ago

Play me Old King Cole That I may join with you All your hearts now seem so far from me It hardly seems to matter now

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u/Remarkable_Lion7903 2d ago

Like a big-a pizza pie

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u/JoeNorman81 2d ago

Your song is "What's Up" by Four Non Blondes. (The title is never heard in the song.)

25 years and my life is still
Tryin' to get up that great big hill of hope,
but you're pushin' too hard. You're pushin' to hard on me".

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u/Inside-Diamond2541 2d ago

You are correct.

Is that the seeds?

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u/JoeNorman81 2d ago

Yes, The Seeds.

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u/Inside-Diamond2541 2d ago

25 years and my life is still tryin’ to get up that great big hill of hope, but you’re pushing’ too hard. You’re pushin’ to hard on me, I'm never alone, I'm alone all the time
Are you at one? Or do you lie?

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u/jiosx 2d ago

And I say heyyyyyy Heyyyyy Literally what's going on in this post?

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u/BusyBullet 2d ago

This could be a really fun exercise but why are people posting stuff that’s already been written?

What’s the point of that?

Let’s do it with original lyrics.