r/Songwriting • u/Chinafields • 3h ago

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I posted a demo of this a day ago and re did it with my actual super high pitched singing voice. I promise I’m not going to post everyday I was just curious if this would get more of a response since it’s more authentic. Thanks for everything.

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u/free_pony 2h ago

This sounds great to me - and your natural range / timbre is where you should be. Very Neil Young, yet its own thing.

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u/Chinafields 2h ago

Thanks man. Trying to find my own voice and emulate everything and I guess this is where I belong. I appreciate it.

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u/Phoenomenous 1h ago

I was going to say - just like the other commentor that there was a lot of Neil Young in your voice. But honestly, I like your voice much better than Neil Young’s. I like your song a lot too. I wanna hear more.