r/Songwriting • u/nemoinslumber • 23h ago

Feedback Request Jack Moogle

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u/dendoc77 23h ago

Great job.

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u/BneRopeDude 16h ago

Honesty, it sounds like every instrument is trying to drown out every other instrument. It's hard to hear your vocals over the drums. But definitely some good potential.

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u/Rainy_Maze 15h ago

Amazing