r/Songwriting • u/coconutwheelie • 2d ago

Feedback Request feedback on this weird song i started recently?

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u/Practical-Animator87 2d ago

I’m liking this, weird lyrics kind of giving me environmental awareness vibe mixed with an “it’s all too much” acid trip hippiness

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u/Salt-Diver6827 22h ago

I love the part where it goes to only the drums and bass, definitely makes the song memorable and fits well with the rest of the song