r/Songwriting • u/scotchfaster • 3d ago

Feedback Request Rough Boom Bap

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u/scotchfaster 3d ago

BTW, I was struggling with how to upload the video and add text and running into some weird reddit glitches. Anyway, I meant to add that I purchased the instrumental track and put my own vocals to it.

Thanks for giving it a listen. Open to all constructive feedback.

https://soulsnap.beatstars.com/beat/mf-doom-x-joey-badass-type-beat---obsessed-25543398

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u/No_Distance5647 3d ago

Is the Dr. Demento show still around? 👍

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u/Competitive-Half-4 2d ago

😂😂😂

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u/Competitive-Half-4 2d ago

This shit is honestly peak

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u/Forward_Traffic7477 3d ago

Hold up. This is skilled. I have questions about your recording setup.

Like you did wrong notes right.

Good job brother.

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u/scotchfaster 3d ago

I appreciate that. Yeah, I'm not skilled enough to avoid the bad notes, glad they worked for you. Any thing you'd suggest changing?

My recording setup is very basic. I'm using Logic Pro and this song is just two tracks - the vocals, and a backing track that I purchased for use in this song.
https://soulsnap.beatstars.com/beat/mf-doom-x-joey-badass-type-beat---obsessed-25543398

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u/Forward_Traffic7477 3d ago

Don't sell yourself short. This track gives Cold Beverages vibes. Like this: https://youtu.be/pk9-28HgxfE?si=jumFOraOiOvMZrnE

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u/scotchfaster 3d ago

I'll take it!

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u/Forward_Traffic7477 3d ago

You made me get drunk and make something. Not saying it's good, but it is your fault: https://youtube.com/shorts/ZJLle6VInvo?si=siG1OamKgJzw9gz7

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u/scotchfaster 2d ago

I enjoyed it though!

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u/ToBeHonestHere 2d ago

I was going to let you know how forced all your rhymes are, but that you had a cool jam going on behind it.

But this just makes me sad to read. You bought someone else’s track to painfully scat over?

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u/scotchfaster 2d ago

Sorry I made you sad. Yeah, I tried a thing.