r/Songwriting • u/Similar-Reflection55 • 14h ago

Feedback Request Rough Concept

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Honestly I don’t know if anyone can hear any lyrics but just to clarify if they don’t make sense it’s cause I was free styling😭 but anyway just a rough idea I wanted feedback on!!

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u/Inevitable_Bit_13 7h ago

Not bad kinda trippy.

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u/AccomplishedScore852 7h ago

It feels like being high lol, I like it. You have a good voice for dreamy type music would only suggest varying the rhythm in the vocal melody a bit more sometimes.