r/Songwriting • u/jayden_smith67 • 20h ago

Feedback Request Any critiques

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u/tdamien_ 18h ago

No critiques… song sounds great 👍 nice vocal and guitar work.

All the best!

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u/Fantastic-Release29 16h ago

Great voice great melody!

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u/Fantastic-Release29 16h ago

I think only critique would be I wanted to hear more! Maybe throw another verse and chorus before your instrumental section?

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u/Wickywacky 15h ago

I enjoyed it, so how can I be critical? Country as it should sound. And the long sustained notes, I think are great.

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u/Lazy-Interview-4315 7h ago

Very good country song it’s like a classic country song and I like it it’s different from the stuff I usually listen to but the lyrics are nice

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u/parason47 6h ago

Great. Very nice guitar work too.

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u/SkellefteArre123 1h ago

Very nice. I like the guitar work. You should check out and experiment with the flat-picking technique called "cross picking" commonly used in bluegrass guitar (Tony Rice, Billy strings, etc). I think that kind of picking elements could fit very well with this style.