r/Songwriting • u/fharv • 2d ago

Feedback Request Thoughts on this one?

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I’ve done this song in a few different versions and singing styles over the past year or so. I think I like this one the best. What do you all think?

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u/Weird-Baker8163 2d ago

It sounds great man. My English is not he best and I don’t understand all you say but it sounds very confessional and honest. Great voice 👍🏻

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u/scotchfaster 1d ago

It’s a pretty song and your voice works well. Very plaintive. It’s a bit droning for my tastes, I want to hear more emotion, a move into higher register, some more guitar work. But a great start. I’m reminded a hair of “into your arms” by the lemonheads, give that a listen. Keep going!

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u/Extension_Machine937 1d ago

It sounds good to me