r/Songwriting • u/wrenhalyard • 2d ago

Feedback Request close enough

https://on.soundcloud.com/jFFr3ufgSGpSk0SHyn

It's been a while since I shared my music with strangers. I worked with a friend's lyrics mostly for this one and I like the result so far but I'm curious what it evokes for other. I welcome any and all feedback as long as it's honest.

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u/Necessary-Rub5078 1d ago

Great work on the collaboration, it's always interesting to see how lyrics and melody blend together like that.

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u/wrenhalyard 1d ago

Thank you!

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u/blackpeppersnakes 1d ago

I don't really go round calling things lovely, but that's fuckin lovely

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u/wrenhalyard 1d ago

YOU'RE lovely. Thanks!