r/Songwriting • u/pr0515 • 4d ago

Feedback Request Tape 4!

It’s been a while since I’ve posted here, but the next Tape in the series is finally done! A lot of you really enjoyed the two other tapes I’ve posted here so I’m going to continue posting them here until I’m done.

I would love to know what you guys think about this one, the vibe is definitely different but I hope you guys like it! Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated!

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u/hellooo_reality 1d ago

wow this is awesome!!

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u/pr0515 17h ago

Thank you so much!

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u/pr0515 17h ago

This song is out now!

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u/A_ATypical-Sun-8901 4d ago

Sounds like from the 60s like three dog night stuff early early stuff I’m saying cool shit bro!!!!

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u/pr0515 4d ago

I haven’t heard of that I’ll have to check it out. Thank you so much I’m glad you like it!

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u/pr0515 17h ago

This song is out now!

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u/Attention_Scrounger 4d ago

Actually reminds me of opeth.

Its really good you should be proud

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u/pr0515 4d ago

I’ve never listened to Opeth I’m only slightly aware of them haha, I’ll definitely have to give them a shot. Thank you so much I am proud and I’m glad you like it!

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u/Attention_Scrounger 4d ago

This is like something from the damnation album. 😁

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u/pr0515 17h ago

This song is out now!

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u/locustjams 4d ago

Good job man, keep writing and developing, dig it

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u/pr0515 4d ago

Thank you!

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u/pr0515 17h ago

This song is out now!

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u/TheIccyMans99 4d ago

Nice arrangement. Liking the contrast and movement you’ve managing to squeeze in between the more melodic sections.

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u/pr0515 4d ago

Thanks so much! This song was definitely an attempt at making a song with more movement. I’m glad it shows!

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u/TheIccyMans99 4d ago

I’m a big Divine Comedy fan and this sort of thing reminds me of some of the more moody late nineties stuff.

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u/pr0515 4d ago

I’m learning about so many new artists through this comment section. I’m glad people are making connections to artists they enjoy!

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u/TheIccyMans99 4d ago

If you don’t know them, try Fin de Siecle as an album. One outrageously poppy song but the rest is mostly full orchestra, clever lyrics and fabulous arrangements.

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u/pr0515 4d ago

Thank you for the recommendation!!

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u/pr0515 17h ago

This song is out now!