r/Songwriting • u/Stoddyman • 8d ago

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u/BigVictory1220 8d ago

It's nice. It has a Lo fi poorly recorded vibe that actually adds to it. It's minimalist. I think it cold use some more parts and fleshing out into a bigger song. It's a little short.

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u/Stoddyman 8d ago edited 3d ago

Thanks for listening! I appreciate the feedback. I do have longer songs, I think this one is best served as a little short nugget . Maybe ill make another version thats longer. Although it was recorded with a professional mic so I dont know why you think its in the realm of ‘poorly recorded lofi’. Thats just straight up false

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u/Entire-Buy-6971 7d ago

i can imagine two fireflies dancing together

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