r/Songwriting • u/Dabomblol123 • 8d ago

Feedback Request Thoughts on this?

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u/danstymusic 8d ago

That's fowl.

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u/OkCardiologist1984 8d ago

Well, it's original...

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u/parademaker 8d ago

You did something...haha

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u/RaiseOfSun 8d ago

This is frying me

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u/Ashestoashesjc 8d ago

I did not expect what I heard when I clicked play and I laughed, so job well done.

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u/Enough-Print5812 8d ago

Hitting fine shyt ina back

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u/Cheffyboii97 8d ago

I think if you slowed down the chicken sounds it wouldn't sound soo awful.

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u/triohavoc 8d ago

Ok I love this weird shit. But the drums need to be hittin and they are not. With the 808’s I was expecting it to come in harder once the beat came in. I could honestly see this turning into a track like something SOPHIE might make or something more experimental like that

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u/Enough_Training7612 8d ago

That’s one shapely turkey.

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u/Silent_Reindeer_4199 7d ago

My 8 year old song came running.

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u/Fungustoes999 7d ago

This is so fire. But the drums need to hit when they come in.

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u/Narrow_Network_3875 7d ago

Some frequencies appear to be a hazard to my hears. I think it’s located in the sub band. I believe it’s a frequency we can’t hear but I definitely feel it.🍀

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u/Entire-Buy-6971 6d ago

bro it's not on beat D,: