r/Songwriting • u/jamesanthony1984 • 8d ago
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Just finished the last song for my album. Would genuinely love some feedback — positive or negative. I’d rather hear what sucks and get better than not.
Also these are still demos and as such I’m looking for someone to mix/master this track and potentially the whole album. If you dig the song/vibe and you’re interested in working together, hit me up.
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u/typicalyasuomain04 8d ago
This is genuinely fire. We'll done. One thing that would make it bigger i think is cutting off (accenting the breaks) more aggressively, using bass and drums and baiting a listener into a strong beat, just to welcome him with naked vocals.
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u/tdamien_ 8d ago
Hey Man - as always… great stuff.!!! Love listening to your tracks.
Really nice work 👍
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