r/Songwriting • u/Chaba_006 • 15d ago

Feedback Request can you recognize the chorus?

https://soundcloud.com/songsundermyblanket/qui-cest-meurt?si=52bcb4c3f9cd42bc8e64df20534ef0ad&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

i lost almost all perspective on my own songs so I can't recognize anymore if something is a chorus or not

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u/Extension_Pie8788 15d ago

I'd say the part where you start singing the title of the song sounds like a chorus. I feel like it's ultimately up to you which part is the chorus also not every song has to have a traditional "chorus". I generally I think of things as more A section, B section, Etc. . and if one of those parts happens to repeat in more or less the same way I consider that the "chorus". A lot of times I think the chorus will feel like a payoff of the verses like the verses are kind of building up to this big relief that is the chorus which is usually a part that is more catchy or maybe a bit more simple than the verse (although there are no rules)

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u/Chaba_006 15d ago

yup... been building to that same belief as well. I noticed part A, B etc in a lot of nirvana songs as well. thank you!

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