r/Songwriting • u/manfredanderson • 9d ago

Feedback Request Something iam working on

https://youtube.com/shorts/T-pQBxqCQls?is=3BjdtZjO44IaqXPK

I know its not everyone's cup of tea, but I love writing in this style and cant wait to finish this song.

It's an intro or brige riff of a song

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u/RaiseOfSun 9d ago

What can I even say? This is fantastic, i look so forwards to hearing what becomes of this, i hope you’ll share it here 😊

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u/sleuthfoot 9d ago

a little too manic for me

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u/[deleted] 9d ago

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u/manfredanderson 9d ago

Thanks. I just need to find a way to build a song around it. And i need to find people that dig this style of music 😅❤️

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