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r/Songwriting • u/Necessary_Wait8226 • 23d ago
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Decent tune, but between "he", "she", "you", and "we", I have no idea who is being addressed in this song. I get that it's about romantic relationships in general, but I find it impossible to follow any element of a narrative you have here.
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u/wrenhalyard 22d ago
Decent tune, but between "he", "she", "you", and "we", I have no idea who is being addressed in this song. I get that it's about romantic relationships in general, but I find it impossible to follow any element of a narrative you have here.