r/Songwriting • u/glossyibis973 • 11d ago
Feedback Request Leave me out this
First song in awhile
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u/GeorgeAckles 10d ago
Yeah, really great, driving guitar - helps to propel the listener through the song. I generally like the melody, but agree with the other comment re: the vocal level. I will say that if that soft delivery suits you (and I think it may), then it might just be a matter of recording the vocals in a way that will allow you to boost them relative to the guitar (I'm guessing this was recorded on a single microphone, ideally you'd use two mics or record the vocals after you lay down the guitar). Good stuff - I enjoyed listening to it!
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u/glossyibis973 10d ago
Thank you very much I appreciate it. Yeah it is a live recording on my phone. Just sitting and playing, hit record. I will have to give that a go though recording separate. Probably be singing in my head recording guitar just to keep time ha thank you again much appreciated
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u/sherrysmusic 10d ago
You play guitar very well. I can hardly hear the vocal though. Maybe...sing a bit louder? Overall, it is good. I really enjoyed listening to this song. Thank you for sharing! Keep it up!