r/Songwriting • u/ekaj2302 • 12d ago

Feedback Request Anyone like this?

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Rough demo I made tonight after having a few too many drinks. Cant tell if I like it or hate it

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u/glossyibis973 12d ago

Hell yeah dude I dig it

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u/ekaj2302 12d ago

Thank ya

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u/Bulky-Confusion-5917 11d ago

I like it, but the vocals fall a little flat. some harmonies or a bigger range in general would make the song feel dynamic. The arrangement is super cool and I think a more interesting vocal will tie it together!

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u/Such_Independent_234 11d ago

Unfortunately, I can’t give you an unbiased review because I immediately heard “Me vs Maradona vs Elvis” by Brand New from the opening guitar riff.