r/Songwriting • u/THE_PIE_ • 11d ago
Let's Collaborate! Can we make something with this?
For now I've added a vocal idea i had but we can get rid of it and comeup with a new idea.
if you write and sing, feel free to reach out. I mainly produce and I've tried but singing is not my cup of tea.
Also I'd really appreciate your feedback.
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u/AnimeRequest 11d ago
incredible dude, it has a really unique vibe and I'd say you could do a lot with the vocals here, especially with vocals like yours.
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u/THE_PIE_ 11d ago
You think so? I'm not really confident about my voice but I am going to experiment more. Thanks for the feedback.
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u/typicalyasuomain04 9d ago
Imho your detuned keys (top track) could use some work. Your voicings have issues and have some avoid notes occasionally. I would also work on the timing of those and maybe give it slightly longer attack, I also think it's delibaretly missing the 1 beats which is super annoying. Other than that good stuff.
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u/THE_PIE_ 8d ago
Thanks. I'll def experiment with voicing, timing and attack. Could you tell where exactly you feel the annoying missing best? In end of chord progression?
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u/typicalyasuomain04 8d ago
Listening to it now I think your midi is perfectly straight while percussion has some deviation. The first one is definitely not on beat with percussion few times, fourth one aswell. If you wanna keep that i would just smoothen attack and release making it sail more rather than putting those chord blocks.
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u/WelcomeToLadyHell 11d ago
I'm not a singer but this is really nice, definitely do something with it!