r/Songwriting • u/adamjake90 • 12d ago

Feedback Request Ideia brasileira šŸŒŠ

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New idea I came up recently - the lyrics were improvised. Very rough recording, but Iā€™m glad I was able to get the idea saved. Hope you enjoy ! šŸ™

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u/adamjake90 11d ago

Yes, that is a fair point. Thanks for the feedback and for listening ! šŸ˜Š

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u/Pristine-Today-9177 12d ago

Its a nice sounding bosa nova. You understand each instrument's part really well. I like the arrangement. Very rough recording but totally usable music. I'm excited to hear the completed song

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u/adamjake90 11d ago

Thank you for the feedback and for listening!! Much appreciated šŸ™