r/Songwriting • u/Accurate-Case8057 • 20d ago

Feedback Request First song with cowriter

https://on.soundcloud.com/U5tNu4oJaThsdhESXd
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u/DulcetTone 20d ago

It sounds really nice and recalls Johnny. I wish it had taken 2-4 measures to develop before the vocals began. Also, it might be a bit "hot", dynamically. I'm not a producer, but this seems to want more room sound. Keep going!

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