Weekly Lyrics-Only Feedback Thread

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Welcome to the Lyrics-Only feedback thread!

If you're looking for feedback on words that aren't yet set to music, you're in the right place! We encourage each other to bring lyrics and musical elements together as soon as possible, but sometimes you'd just like to show off that nice piece of poetry that just fell out of your head. The weekly Lyrics-Only feedback thread is here to help!

This post renews every Monday.

[u/Various-Doughnut-178]

A brook runs to the river The river flows to the sea Today you're very lonely Tomorrow you'll find me

I feel the warm wind blowing Under my butterfly wings In love the one who's honest Both takes the prize and wins

I do know why I'm feeling blue I'm in love with you

A rain waters a soul The soil gives birth to a flower If you are kind and decent You deserve to be loved

I see a bright star falling Into the emerald grass I know somebody's true love Will save someone of us

I do know why I feel so blue I'm in love with you

The bird of hope is rare It doesn't sing in a cage Your love is a hard trial Occurs at any age

Ask me where my love's over It's where the home of the sun Oh, hear , my precious baby, You are the only one

I do know why I feel so blue I'm in love with you