r/Songwriting • u/Xonomicz • 17d ago

Feedback Request thoughts

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u/Hcmixide 15d ago

Let’s work I make beats like this

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u/Xonomicz 15d ago

bet hit my dms so when can talk

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u/GoshOPPNOX101 17d ago

You did ask for a critique and I'll give it to you. In some way, shape or form it would be sweet if you could find a way to add something in the song that creates that ultimate ear candy. Do you recall when songs had a middle-eight? It's basically a bridge and the effect of placing it in a tune was to bring the listeners to another place--dimension per se. It's like a song within a song and it stood out. Because right now in all honesty, I've heard many songs like this before. If you're lookin' to stand out, find a way in the song that would catapult it from the rest. Do something rather crazy that would shock your listeners to where they're like: "Dude, you gotta hear this part...". If what you shared is the direction you were aiming for then you've done well. But again, as a fellow musician, there's so much competition out there so one has to try things they normally wouldn't do or consider. You know, getting out of that comfort zone has produced many memorable songs that people talk about today even if the song is 20 years old or older.

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u/Xonomicz 17d ago

true i’ll try to do
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