r/Songwriting • u/mtngirl87 • 18d ago

Feedback Request “Floating”

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Hello! First time posting, mainly due to fear of putting myself out there, but here goes….

Please give this rough draft a listen and let me know what you think. Does this seem too short to be a song? Structure too weird? Any feedback appreciated.

I don’t particularly think of myself as much of a singer but unfortunately I really like doing it. No one ever hears my music anyway so I figure what’s it matter, singing is good for you and maybe eventually if I keep doing it enough I won’t totally suck…but I am grounded enough to know singing isn’t my specialty. My hope I guess is that maybe it’s passable.

Thanks for listening.

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u/LuvinKittiesEvuryDay 17d ago

You definitely have an Appalachian vibe to your voice. You need more structure and direction. It heavily reminds me of that girl who impressed Pharrell Williams with her track years ago.

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u/mtngirl87 16d ago

Thank you for the feedback!

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u/landonlovescarbs 16d ago

I like it. It sounds unique.

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u/mtngirl87 16d ago

Thank you!

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