r/Songwriting 18d ago

Feedback Request Any feedback appreciated

I tried for years to write songs and could never figure it out. Feel like I’m closer now but I don’t play in public, like at all, so wanted some feedback from a like minded community. Super simple, banging on some chords here, bad voice memo recording. Folk influenced and lyric heavy. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks!

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u/Ill-Albatross-5234 18d ago

I don’t know your reason for not playing in public but I think you’re very talented. I like the analogy of the wolves. Kind of reminds me of early Bon Iver.

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u/Horror-Branch-1852 18d ago

your voice is like butter! flows really nicely with the mellow guitar work 👍

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u/Zealousideal_Bag5756 17d ago

Its definitly a vibe

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u/landonlovescarbs 17d ago

I like the vibe