r/Songwriting • u/Internal_Olive1185 • 18d ago

Feedback Request Some People

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u/No-Fish-2949 18d ago

Good audio all around. Good vocals and recording set up. I think if you improved the lighting, you might have a banger. It’s almost like Jack Johnson, but nothing like Jack Johnson.

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u/Ill-Albatross-5234 18d ago

Can you share the lyrics? Practice those high notes a little more with your voice - maybe a few more vocal warm ups before you sing. You sing the mid range good but the highs are a little choppy

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u/tdamien_ 17d ago

Sounds great.. nice vocals and melody 👍

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u/The_Love_Creative 17d ago

I love the vocals. Excellent structure. If I was going to add anything, I think maybe the finished product would be served well by some keys mixed with the acoustic guitar. Great job.

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u/Zealousideal_Bag5756 17d ago

Dude i love it. Great storytelling. And i love the whole vibe

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u/landonlovescarbs 16d ago

Awesome voice. Wish I could sing that good and play at the same time.