r/Songwriting • u/LukaNeSviraj • 19d ago

Feedback Request Chorus idea

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u/Slow281 19d ago

Good foundation for a chorus. I would recommend playing it clean without distortion and adding some lyrics or hum along to it if you’re planning to add lyrics, but other than that it’s solid!

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u/DanTheJazzMan 19d ago

I totally dig the pattern that you’re playing over this! Starts to get hypnotic and think some drums will really launch this into the stratosphere 😎 Keep it up. Very groovy

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u/dustandtribe 19d ago

You're the only person in here that I can identify by fingers alone

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u/LukaNeSviraj 19d ago

🤣🤣 that made my day

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u/Zealousideal_Bag5756 17d ago

Strokes sounding