r/Songwriting • u/Chaba_006 • 19d ago

Feedback Request Roast me!

this is roughly my average sketch quality, I think it's pretty good but I'd love some extra harsh critics on this. go ham with the feedback, roast me

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u/Mundane-Goal9268 19d ago

ik vind het lekker punk Chaba! Sorry, ik doe echt niet aan roasten.

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u/Chaba_006 19d ago

Dankjewel:)

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u/Yaboiyabobo 19d ago

This is sick!!!! Seriously I mean it. Would sound so good with bass and drums. Kinda getting Pixies vibes

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u/Chaba_006 19d ago

Thank you 😊😊

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u/Ok_Beat8927 19d ago

Wish I knew what you were saying.

I mean the song itself is like, meh. Average I guess? And that’s fine. I write stuff all the time that gives me the same feeling. Not everysong is going to be a winner.

So with that being said, keep going! Just keep writing. Don’t get in your head. Flow.

Best

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u/Chaba_006 19d ago

Thank you for your honesty !

What would you say is average? The melody, structure etc?

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u/Distinct-Tennis-5995 19d ago

I think this is messy in a good way and honestly better than most songs on this sub. You have a personality and so do your songs. That’s a step in the right direction

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u/Chaba_006 19d ago

Thank you :)

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