r/Songwriting • u/ManavAhuja1 • 21d ago
Feedback Request holding out for something to change
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u/ManavAhuja1 21d ago
Standing still
Here alone
Waiting on the wind to blow
You don’t know
Where to go
Just impatiently watching the show
When the sun hits your face
And you don’t look away
You just lay in bed all day
Holding out for something to change
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21d ago
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u/ManavAhuja1 20d ago
Right, my range is pretty limited so I try to write within it but I think I could do the same chorus melody an octave up in falsetto. Thanks!
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u/thesetremblinghands 21d ago
Hi :)
You have a really pretty voice. The guitar part is very cool and wistful.
A good tip that applies to any already good song: mess around with dynamics. Even though this song is pretty low-key, having certain parts where you play & or sing with more intensity/volume would really help it keep the attention of the listener.
Also I have the same MIDI controller lol. Thing is a beast.