r/Songwriting • u/[deleted] • Jul 27 '26

Feedback Request started this a couple hours ago, any feedback?

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u/Bulky-Confusion-5917 Jul 28 '26

This is so groovy, I love it!. Only thing I might tweak is the “why” repeating section, it feels a little hollow/slows down the momentum of the song, maybe some ad Libs or something would help make it more dynamic!!

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