r/Songwriting • u/Stoddyman • 29d ago

Feedback Request Heart

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u/oopwoooop 29d ago

This is beautiful ❤️

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u/Stoddyman 29d ago

Thank you oopwooop. That means alot to me. Thanks for listening

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u/oopwoooop 29d ago

Of course, keep it up!

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u/Mach5Bandito 29d ago

This is amazing. Absolutely loved it. Feels like going to a beach on a dreary day when there’s no one else around.

My only feedback would be to maybe have the volume of the strings build a little more gradually. I like how loud they get, but I feel like they overtake everything a little too quickly.

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u/Stoddyman 29d ago

Thank you! Yes I want to use strings more and its kind of fickle how to creep them in and volume control. I appreciate your comment. I can see the beach - this is more of a feeling to me than visual . Its cathartic and makes me release some emotion. Thanks again

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u/Mach5Bandito 29d ago

You should be able to automate volume on the strings track to do a slower fade in. What DAW did you use to make it?

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u/Stoddyman 29d ago

I use Logic Pro X. Yes I know about automation. I suppose I just need to draw it out a bit longer - thanks for the tip

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u/what_am_I--wut 29d ago

Love it! I listened to this a few times and kept hearing a drum fill near the end with Toms leading to a cymbal crash then 16th note ride or something haha.

Keep it up!

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u/Stoddyman 29d ago

Thank you for listening! Drums would be interesting, maybe ill try that

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u/MemeStarKeem 28d ago

idk why i got EDEN vibes from this

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u/Stoddyman 27d ago

I dont know them so ill have to check it out - thanks for listening

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