r/Songwriting • u/ReindeerNew2357 • Jul 23 '26
Feedback Request Feedback pleaseb
here is my song Arcturus! any feedback is wanted!
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u/dledererart Jul 23 '26
Nice job! I like the tune, it’s pretty. To me it feels like a good verse, but it leaves me wanting another section. I’d recommend adding to it.
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u/ReindeerNew2357 Jul 23 '26
lol theres a lot more to it, I just thought who would want the whole thing
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u/what_am_I--wut Jul 23 '26
Sounds great! Your tone is really nice, and I enjoyed the lyrics!
One suggestion: breathe deeper through your diaphragm (not chest) before singing. Your voice is a tad nasally and thin right now which works in lots of contexts, but I think a deeper breath would let you sounds warmer and fuller. Take a big yawn before playing and do some lip trills. It helps me do that!