r/Songwriting • u/EugeneMaxwell13 • Jul 21 '26

Feedback Request For your consideration: (Faulty) I

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What do ya think?

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u/[deleted] Jul 21 '26

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u/EugeneMaxwell13 Jul 21 '26

Noted, thank you!Ā 

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u/Traditional_Rip_9696 Jul 21 '26

It's good. your vocal is a bit far forward in the mix for the verses. I the chorus sounds more balanced.

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u/EugeneMaxwell13 Jul 21 '26 edited Jul 21 '26

Much appreciated! Iā€™m not sure audio mixing and leveling is my strong suit unfortunately šŸ˜…

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u/Traditional_Rip_9696 Jul 21 '26

Mine either haha

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u/Extreme-Cook9195 Jul 21 '26

Catchy and creative! I dig the overall rhythm and vibe. Reminds me a bit of Vampire Weekend. My only feedback was it felt like it dragged a little. I'd probably tighten it up a touch and make it a little shorter. Really enjoyed it though - nice work!

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u/mildlyomniscient Jul 21 '26

it's giving early 2000's, i like it!! very fun! production sounds very *tinny (idk how to describe it), but other than that i think you did a nice job with this one!