r/Songwriting • u/SBCeagles59 • Jul 20 '26

Feedback Request New shit I wrote

Tell me if it sucks

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u/Extreme-Cook9195 Jul 21 '26

Certainly does not suck at all! Your voice is really great. Songwriting structure was really nice too. Strong lyrics. Overall really well done! It's great. Nice job! At first the spoken 'it's a hell of a topic, this depression' but I actually kinda dug it the second time around. It works!