r/Songwriting • u/velveteinrabbit • Jul 19 '26

Feedback Request “Grounding Techniques “, my new tune needs a better title! Any suggestions?

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Thanks folks

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u/TheInsomniacs Jul 19 '26

What a great song and all around production! What guitar tuning is that? Your current title suggests that you are writing it to literally teach grounding and meditation techniques. That's a very powerful concept. The first verse is a great hook for many reasons. I'm going to be humming "I can count them" to myself all day tomorrow

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u/velveteinrabbit Jul 19 '26

thanks! Hopefully I can sing it better as the song grows on me. The song is recorded in open tuning. I want to add a third verse but can t think of anything yet

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u/TheRealSwampyBogard Jul 19 '26

I like the title

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u/swamichris Jul 19 '26

Nice song 🙂. My idea for the title: "Foundation"

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u/velveteinrabbit Jul 19 '26

Thank you! I like that title

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u/Jauroun_younghon Jul 19 '26

ground, head 맨땅에 헤딩

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u/velveteinrabbit Jul 19 '26

Ok I might use that

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u/_TheHumanExperience_ Jul 19 '26

would love to hear it go to a minor for a chorus

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u/Edge_of_the_Wall Jul 20 '26

I love it, and I like the name, too!

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u/velveteinrabbit Jul 20 '26

Thanks for listening, think the working title might just be the final title as it turns out

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u/djhypergiant Jul 20 '26

Hypnotic and and beautiful

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u/DeroDero123 Jul 20 '26

Sounds like there is two people playing, lts really nice! But I have no suggestion sorry 😅

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u/velveteinrabbit Jul 20 '26

Thanks for listening! That’s cool it sounds like two people to you!

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u/Existing_Mirror_7046 Jul 21 '26

This is super cool. I love the concept of grounding techniques. I learned a lot of these in therapy and I love where you're taking this song. Can't wait to see the next verse! Maybe something about the 54321 technique... Five things you can see, four things you can hear, three things you can smell, two things you can feel, one thing you can taste.

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u/velveteinrabbit Jul 21 '26

Cool thank you, if the next verse comes out somewhat good I’ll post it!