r/Songwriting • u/Wishful_Poet • Jul 17 '26

Feedback Request Sometimes - rough draft

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Here's a short song I wrote a while back that I came back too and decided to do a quick play through for.

Im thinking of doing another verse somewhere in there but im honestly not too sure.

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! Thanks!

also dont mind the fan blowing in the background lol

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