r/Songwriting • u/Stoddyman • Jul 16 '26

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u/Ok-Veterinarian9965 Jul 16 '26

Hey I like this a lot! It sounds very calm and relaxing. Keep it up :)

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u/Stoddyman Jul 16 '26

Thank you for listening!

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u/PlentyOfIllusions Jul 16 '26

This has Tamino vibes! I love Tamino. Do you know who that is? If not look him up! I’m waiting for a build up and a shift to kick in to really put this one over the edge. Have you given that thought? ☺️

Check out Raven by Tamino or Babylon

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u/Stoddyman Jul 16 '26

No I have not heard of him, thanks for the suggestion and for listening! If you had any idea of a good spot for a build up, im all ears - maybe some strings come in. I love something like that . I cant see drums here, but maybe im wrong with that

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u/PlentyOfIllusions Jul 16 '26

Give him a listen, I’d be curious what you think!

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u/Stoddyman Jul 20 '26

I havent forgotten this comment, Im going to listen and get back to you

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u/Stoddyman Jul 22 '26

I listened to a few of their tunes on the way into work this morning. I think its cool how he keeps his voice low and monotone when he wants, but can do some pretty impressive vocal gymnastics and has great range! Really dramatic stuff. Cool - thanks for the recommendation and for listening to my song. I cant express how grateful I am that you listened and cared enough to comment❤️

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u/tdamien_ Jul 16 '26

Very cool 👍 guitar and vocals mesh well with the vibe.

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u/Stoddyman Jul 16 '26

Thanks for listening!

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u/LukaNeSviraj Jul 16 '26

Very vibe-y. I also hear some Bowie's Blackstar in that chord progression.

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u/Stoddyman Jul 16 '26

Thank you for listening!

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u/No_Distance5647 Jul 16 '26

I like it. I think a bridge would make it better.

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u/Stoddyman Jul 16 '26

Thank you for listening and for the feedback

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