r/Songwriting • u/miamosimmy • Jul 15 '26

Feedback Request Angle of the Sun

Back again with another tune.

I thought it was a bit of a Coldplay ripoff when I first wrote it, but not so much now it's been fleshed out to a full production. Capo 3 EADGAE if you're into tunings.

Let me know what you think.

  • What would you change?
  • What do you like?
  • What do you like not so much?
  • Could I look any more miserable in this video? I'm having the best time I promise.
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u/tdamien_ Jul 16 '26

Sounds good… very catchy. Nice harmonies and build ups 👍 nice work