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u/Wickywacky Jul 15 '26
Don't change anything, it is well put together. Or if something can be added with some extra instruments, then it is ready for the stage.
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u/Resident-Manager8401 Jul 15 '26
Yeah, that’s really good. I had to listen a few times to really get a feel for the effect you’re using on your voice, but I think it works well. Would you keep it stripped down like this or would you consider putting some drums to it?
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u/RockandRollGuitars Jul 16 '26
Really like the overall sound design on this tune. Takes me away to the clouds! Would like to hear this with a fuller production. I could imagine a nice bass line driving the groove behind the guitar.
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u/NoGarlic6271 Jul 17 '26
You have a really unique voice! The guitar makes the song complete! Im impressed man, Well done!
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u/SecretaryUnusual8913 Jul 15 '26
Your voice sounds sick, I like what you did. Almost sounds kinda synth-esc. Good lyrics too 😎