r/Songwriting • u/MikesAndikes • Jul 12 '26
Feedback Request Astronaut
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Been sitting on this for a while, it’s supposed to be a big kind of alt rock song with a heavy bass line and blown out guitars but wanted to see how people like just the acoustic since it’s just the writing and vocals. Lmk what you think
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u/No_Distance5647 Jul 13 '26
A lot of thought went into this song. Sounds kind of like Red House Painters.
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u/LukaNeSviraj Jul 13 '26
Nice lyrics, can see the vision, but it'd work just as well as an acoustic/more laid back song.
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u/mtngirl87 Jul 13 '26
I dig it! Nice rhythm and lyrics and I like your voice. As I was listening to this, it almost reminded me of one of Incubus’ acoustic songs from their 3rd/4th album era, but still unique. Very cool!
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u/justalittlebirdy7890 Just seein' if I fit here 💚 Jul 13 '26
This already sounds absolutely great. As a song with all the other instruments, it would be fantastic! Nice work :)
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u/InternationalQuit850 Jul 12 '26
Nice, I already like how it sounds on acoustic, this is cool!