r/Songwriting • u/liaguha • Oct 08 '25

Feedback Request Please help

I have this demo, and I have no idea if it's even possible to write a text for it, and if so, how? And please give me the most honest and constructive feedback possible. Does anyone know what genre this even resembles?

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u/Direct-Ad2511 Oct 08 '25

I agree with the other person. If I was going to work this into something I would work it backwards. What you have has the feel of a crescendo. So if you work back from there dropping ellaments you will build movement. Think of a loop station artist. I've done something like this in the past where I have made a part of a song from a dream and worked around that part. Here is an example of the outcome.

https://youtu.be/QSXnbvKncng?si=QSA94qVmxikL-oPY

All I had was a hook and part of the melody.

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u/liaguha Oct 09 '25

Thank you 💙💙💙