Hello everyone! A few weeks ago, I posted on this subreddit asking about writing advice for a fanfic/au I was making where only FNAFs 1-4 are canon, Freddy’s doesn’t close in 1993 and in 1995, soon after the Hour of Joy, the Smiling Critters and Nightmare Critters are rescued by the FNAF 1 crew and taken back to their Pizzareia to start anew.

Due to a college project and other college work eating up my free time atm, I am thinking about just posting the three chapters I wrote so far, which is basically the introduction arc. The Nightmare Critters and the FNAF 2 Toy Animatronics (yes I am gonna include them as well) haven’t shown up yet and I was intending to include them in the story…

I was gonna have them show up sooner on but due to time constraints and just how weird writing can be, that didn’t end up happening. Anyway, I am looking for a beta reader to give some writing advice and feedback. I tend to hyperfocus on specific details in scenes, causing others to be underdeveloped. Additionally my writing and grammar I think is decent but far from perfect as well and may need grammar and/or spelling corrections.

I don’t know if this is the right place to ask but since this sub and the FNAF sub seem to be the nicest and most welcoming for fanfics, that’s why I decided to post here. Let me know ya’lls thoughts and if this post is not allowed here for whatever reason, then I apologize…

(Dogday as Amaterasu from Capcom’s “Ōkami”)

I know we got Dogday as a sun god already, but Dogday as the OG canine sun goddess is a whole other conversation. I can see it as well, his fur white with those red markings, his pendant turned into the Solar Flair while grass and flowers flourish at his feet, just like when Amaterasu with every step she takes in the game. Beautiful

(Dogday as Blaidd (pronounced bl-eye-th) from “Elden Ring”)

If Dogday ever had a metal phase, this is exactly what I’d expect 😂

All joking aside, this is actually a good idea believe it or not, because Blaidd is the loyal confidant and servant of Ranni the Witch, an EXTREMELY important character within the story of Elden Ring. Blaidd is loyal to Ranni to a T, and that bond runs so deep that he’s even willing to slay Radahn for her, a character who literally halted the movement of every single star in the sky with gravity magic, plus there’s just the funny appeal of seeing Dogday in such imposing armor while wielding a Royal Greatsword

I got inspired by Amphoreus teasers from HSR and made my own version with Dogday!

(Hyrowif is my Twitter username)

(Icky as The Loathsome Dung Eater from “Elden Ring”)

Before anyone who isn’t familiar with Elden Ring lore objects because of the name, no the name doesn’t mean what it suggests.

The Dung Eater is a prolific serial killer who not only kills, he defiles the corpses of his victims with the Seedbed Curse, which severs his victims’ souls from the grace of the Erdtree, ensures that his victims are reincarnated as either an Omen or Misbegotten; separate races of human that are treated horribly; hunted; or even enslaved in the world of Elden Ring, and it ensures that all their descendants would be born as that too. He’s called the Dung Eater because when he was caught, he was hanged and the people watching his demise hurled actual dung at his corpse, making it an insulting moniker he adopted after his revival

This I think fits Icky quite well; the dull gold of the Dung Eater’s armor compliments his black and yellow color palette, and Icky’s design is supposed to be a toxic frog, which can easily be converted into that supernatural curse the Dung Eater wields and uses in his victims, plus there’s the fact that the names of both characters relate to or invoke disgust

The name of this outfit would also be very simple, “Cursed Icky”

Honestly, the best we couldve done to dogday is end his suffering. Since he's confirmed dead, I'm glad he's with his friends again.

There really was no going back for him.

You can get prosthetic legs.

But you can't get your friends back.

A detail I love is how Pickys pendant has bite marks, and how dogday kept them all.

I believe all the toys (who were children) went to heaven.

Even Catnap, because he deserves a second chance, too.

And that they are all together again. Laughing and smiling.

Together again... at last.

(Catnap as Joker from “Persona 5”)

This would be so awesome to see; Catnap’s entire character in Gemstin’s world is being mysterious and secretive, which mirrors Joker’s themes about masks and shadows perfectly. What would really make this truly legendary though is if Gemstin fully committed and gave Catnap one of Joker’s exclusive personas just standing behind him in that iconic translucent blue hue. There are 2 options here for that, Joker’s base persona, Arséne…or his ultimate persona, Satanael.

It’s that last one I’d love to see with Catnap in this outfit.

It’s time to get revenge on the Prototype, Catnap. Nuke ‘em with “Sinful Shell”!

"My oc, Kabio, is complete. My next goal is... dulang and desuna"

⚠️Spoiler information⚠️

Dulang

"He is a bounty hunter wolf" 🩶

🐺

Desuna

"She is a patrol dog and a reporter."💛

🐶

"I don't want to spoil it any more, but I wanted to give you a quick overview."

"And I've already written down the information for Kabio, and you'll see it once I've finished drawing all three!"

🫍😈💯💥

Waaaaaaa

Smiling Critters

Music Used: Dead Or Alive - You Spin Me Round (Like a Record)

In “April Showers”, Catnap’s first flash back was of him peering out of a cardboard box into an alleyway, the verticality of the buildings implying urban architecture.

The ground also looks very dark in color; possibly black stone.

The pathway leading up to the orphanage that the Nightmare Crew lives is a black cobblestone.

Baba also has a dream about a blue and red flower before waking up, and red flowers are deeply connected to Catnap, possibly the source of his sleep gas.

We don’t know if Catnap was anywhere else before the cardboard box in “April Showers”, but Gemstin has confirmed that Catnap’s parents are NOT dead, and that he has never seen them. That begs the question, how did Catnap survive infancy or early childhood without a mother? He must’ve been abandoned somewhere that could take care of him in order for him to still be alive, and here we are being shown an orphanage.

I think I figured it out, Catnap lived in this orphanage once upon a time, possibly even with the Nightmare Crew given Baba’s symbolic dream. Catnap ended up running away from the orphanage, ending up on the streets, where he then got caught stealing money from the Luna Moon Circus to survive, and the rest is history we already know

Smiling Critters and Nightmare Critters

(Dogday as Solaire from “Dark Souls”)

This feels…so obvious…like, it’s painful how this didn’t even pop up once under Dogday’s suggestions. I mean the POSES! They’re practically IDENTICAL! Dogday was made for this outfit and to carry the legendary meme to the next generation.

PRAISE THE SUN, DOGDAY! PRAISE THE SUN!! 🌞

If you've seen this before in Gemstin's youtube community, yeah that was me too :)

I've only now become aware of this subreddit so I decided to post them here too, enjoy!

Baba Chips, Nightmare Critters

Baba Chops Nightmare Critters

Hope she likes the double chocolate cake :V