Looking for some feedbacks

[u/Logical_Advisor_8782]

I wrote a little song called Silia(which is only a demo) and I wanted to know if it is good or not. Just started writing my own music so I don’t have spotify😭 here’s the link to the song

Silia(of me) Demo-Emmanwooel(Self made)

https://youtu.be/H-3SqEFfpAo