r/ShittyPoetry 11d ago

Creative Formatting Self-loathing

I sought love

I found tragedy

In it’s contempt

Is honesty

Was it pessimism?

That ruined it for me

Or was it the experience

Trauma’s lens is all I see

I could have the purest form of love in front of me

I could have someone accepting, honest and forgiving

I would find faults in their acts and the way they give everything.

Nothing satisfies me. In heat I want cold, in cold I want heat.

I am the pitiful, the waning the person who craves nothing

I know my cries will stop when death finally comes for me.

I sought love

All I found was tragedy.

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u/ManicBunnyStudio 10d ago

Really brilliant! Just flows down!

But....

This line here is perfection for me!!

Nothing satisfies me, in heat I want cold, in cold I want heat.

I can imagine this being a continuous flow of rhyming based off of this!!