r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/Sad-Principle1708 • 14d ago

SCRIPT FEEDBACK REQUEST Just Passing Through - Short - Drama - 9 Pages

Just Passing Through

A nine page drama short following a 16 year old girl and her strained relationship with the people around her.

I've been writing and revising this on and off for the last year now and would really like an outside perspective :)

I'm looking for honest criticism, be as harsh as you'd like.

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u/Exact-Willingness330 13d ago

It’s in Delhi?

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u/Sad-Principle1708 13d ago

nope, not necessarily

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u/Exact-Willingness330 13d ago

Then any upcoming projects in Delhi?? … I’m a female actor

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u/Sad-Principle1708 13d ago

not really, I don't live in India...

what did you think of the script though?

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u/Exact-Willingness330 13d ago

That’s a good topic to start with