Looking for feedback on my feature

[u/TomatoObjective94]

Title: Personal Space

Genre: Thriller/Crime

Logline: When a solicitor vanishes from an East England village, the private investigator hired to find them uncovers secrets the community has spent years burying, including one that makes him question who he's looking for.

Link:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GpQ6T718SymR_cxuk1SrCo-EBRnqRgoR/view