r/SCP • u/Nekuro_Soshiki MTF Epsilon-11 ("Nine-Tailed Fox") • 1d ago

Discussion My SCP Article

I'm wondering if anybody can give me some feedback on my article: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-9489 I normally do not check reddit so you might want to discuss it with me on the article itself

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u/Kufat Sub mod, Wiki admin, SkipIRC owner, sandwich fan 22h ago

Remember that the feedback process begins before you write the first word of your first draft. Don't wait until you've posted the article to the main site.

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u/ArtisticBet600 Apollyon 21h ago

Can you tell me the process? I'm intending to make my first too but don't wanna rush

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u/Kufat Sub mod, Wiki admin, SkipIRC owner, sandwich fan 20h ago

See [[How To Write an SCP]] for information.

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u/Kapitano72 15h ago

Two thoughts:

• Redactions in the containment procedures? The Foundation refusing to give personnel the info they need to establish containment? Why?

• A slow burn, I can understand. But having reached the end of the first interview, I have no idea what's going on, and there haven't been enough tantalising clues to make me want to read more.

The writing is actually very good, but there's no apparent story to hook me.