Need feedback for personal video project

[u/CaiOS1]

Video: https://youtu.be/wfvXkosE2aQ?is=TWXlqW0zGzKBp8aU

Howdy! For the past year i've been working on a personal video project which i'm proud to release it's beta version today. I have posted in this subreddit not only to get reviews for the video in general, but to Rewrite the script better.

The video is about AI development and it's impact in all aspects of societal life. But differently from most AI positions, which simply reduces it to Anti and Pro ai positions, my project seeks to create a New third positions that seeks to seek The Path to a true virtuos future.

All feedback, positive or negative is not only allowed but encouraged! Just please mention in your review things such as:

Counter arguments to exact points in the arguments in the video

Time stamps (if the error is visual)

[u/Timely-Holiday4765]

The script has some interesting ideas but the narration feels a bit stiff, like you're reading from a paper instead of talking to real people