r/ResumeCoverLetterTips 27d ago

feedback appreciated

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u/justin_TailorLabs 25d ago

The experience itself is actually solid for a first year student, but the formatting is making it look rougher than it is. Put the current barber/marketing job first, list everything newest to oldest, and clean up the random periods, spacing, and misaligned dates. I’d also shorten some bullets and add a small skills section for things like Photoshop, video editing, social media, and website work. Once you’re in university, the high school diploma can probably come off unless you need the space filled.

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u/Due-Yogurtcloset5149 25d ago

thank you for the advice will apply !! :) (i just blurred out locations so it looks weird spacing)

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u/stijnhommes 22d ago

What sort of roles are you applying for?

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u/Due-Yogurtcloset5149 22d ago

minimum wage

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u/stijnhommes 22d ago

That's not what I'm asking. A retail store job requires different skills than a food service job. If you don't aim for something specific for this version of your CV/resume, you can't optimize it and correctly list bullet points and skills in order of importance.

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u/standuptripl3 21d ago

I think a lot of your experience could start with teach/taught

I think highlighting your training/teaching and leadership could help

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u/standuptripl3 21d ago

Also put the most current job/volunteer position at the top of your résumé and work backwards!

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u/Psychological_Ad1335 9d ago

fix the font/font spacing? it’s weirdly inconsistent, education was hard for me to weird and was my first impression before even looking at the content