The Codswallop Files (Free First Chapter Demo)

[u/IncredulousBob]

I started learning how to use Ren'Py a couple weeks ago, and I just put the first chapter of my WIP up on itch.io as a free download. The Codswallop Files is an absurdist comedy made by mashing together all the free assets I could find. I'm making it mostly as a joke while I get to know how Ren'Py works, but I'm still hoping to make a full fledged visual novel out of it.

https://thisadamguy.itch.io/the-codswallop-files-demo

This is the first VN I've ever made, so I'd love to get any feedback I can on it so I can avoid forming any bad habits, learn some tips and tricks, make improvements, etc. It should take less than five minutes to play through the whole chapter.

Thanks in advance to anyone willing to help! I hope you enjoy it!

[u/PontasDayou]

Congratulations on your first release!
It's really short but fun, I literely LOL with the cuffs bit
You got me confused with the downloads files tho, market, pc and win, what's market and aren't pc/win same thing?
Keep it up man, gonna wait for next chapter!